Tighten Wordy Sentences

The tightening wordy is long sentences are not necessarily wordy, nor are short sentences always concise. The wordy sentences can be more hare to understand; for example Ahmed is work at Ohio state university at the computer engineer. I can make short sentences with using short word; the wordy sentences are should be more tighten. For instance, when I start write essay about any topic there is some sentences is very long so when I get back my draft paper from my teachers I get a lot of feed back or comments; but most of the comment it was make more tighten wordy sentences. I really learned from tighten wordy sentences it make my paper easier to me.