Improving Paper 1

The two main areas that need improvement are: 1) discussion of my observations and 2) more observations about the ad.

One example of needed discussion involves the facial expressions of the children. I observed that the children are not smiling and I gave a reason why I thought they should be smiling, but I didn’t give any reasons why they are not smiling. I should have added, “Perhaps the children are not smiling because the advertisers want parents to focus on the clothes rather than the children. This is similar to ads for adults in which the models usually are serious. Another possible reason is that parents think that serious children are more likely to grow up to be successful.”

One example of a missing observation is the location or setting of the ad. The boy on the right is standing on stairs that are clearly outside; I can see shadows on the boy’s jeans. The children on the left are wearing outdoor clothes and possibly are standing on the porch of a vacation cabin. Maybe this setting was chosen to attract wealthy parents who take their families on vacations.

Amal Gedi

Naysayer

Naysayer is a person who habitually expresses negative or pessimistic views Despite a general feeling that things were going well, a few naysayers tried to cast gloom.as I find in web Dictionary and book "I say They say" is negative thing can we argument about it. Is Importent naysayer becoasue they gave the readers alot ideas to argument. For example; if I have paper to write about any topic but is should argument I can uesd "Naysayer" is gone helpp me for alot thing to argument about that topic.

Topic

The topic that I always like to talk about or share with the people is how to respect your parents? That topic it really importent to me,because alot of chlidern in world they don't now how to respect our Mother and Father. It is easy to me to talk about that yopic with people especially for youth becouse always they don't gave any respect to parrents;when they told them to study and don't loss your time game or alot thing is not importent.For example in America when the chlid become 18 years old he/she they try to move to live by them selef, in my culture it so different becouse the child they not move to any where untill they get married.

Book Blog

The different between hit-and run and quotation sandwich. Hit-run is when you write something but without any explanation.
quotation sandwich when you write a paper we should in could claim and main topic

Summarize

When I read the article “Custom-Made “ Tara Parker pope it’s was a lot of example how is different taste when you eat food from my country to different country . The author give a lot example from money different country how marketing or the product is gone a different taste. For example , when I was live in Syria , I was go KFC there was had different taste and was so delicious , when came to USA I really go visit KFC there was had good taste but it’s was a big different taste . So that point show a product popular with Americans may not be popular with Syrians, also the reason why is different taste because Culture has a big effect if people like or not .

Conversation.

As I find the meaning of conversation in Dictionary of American English Longman ,conversation is talk between two or more people in which people ask questions, exchange news ,etc. for example , back to 1960 there was no email or face book account that people chat each other every time , they have to mail the person directly . There was long conversation and , they was feel more easier than now to set in computer screen. For example , I remember when I come to the U.S I did not have facebook account so I use to send paper to my friends because I was feel more easier to chat in facebook or other new technology conversation.

BLOG 2

When I graduate from middle school I bought nokia phone that I still have it till now, this phone is very special to me because she remind me my grandmother. My grandmother passed away two years ago which was very shocking news for me and as well to my family I still remember her beautiful face and they way I used to ran to her warm arms , and I still say every time I looked at phone that am so lucky I still have something remind me of her kindness, sweetness, her bedtime stories . The most thing that I love about this phone is that when I try to open my phone there’s a picture of me and her together .Till now if I went buy any phone I always buy nokia phone becouse it's very quality phone also you can saved anything you went.