Friday, April 1, 2011
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When I graduate from middle school I bought nokia phone that I still have it till now, this phone is very special to me because she remind me my grandmother. My grandmother passed away two years ago which was very shocking news for me and as well to my family I still remember her beautiful face and they way I used to ran to her warm arms , and I still say every time I looked at phone that am so lucky I still have something remind me of her kindness, sweetness, her bedtime stories . The most thing that I love about this phone is that when I try to open my phone there’s a picture of me and her together .Till now if I went buy any phone I always buy nokia phone becouse it's very quality phone also you can saved anything you went.
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This is interesting information. How do you know that Nokia is a good phone? Where has that reputation come from?
ReplyDeleteOne suggestion for writing is: work on rearranging your information so that you answer the questions that readers have right away. When I read this, the first thing I asked myself was, "Why did a PHONE remind her of her grandma?" It wasn't until the end that you told readers that her picture was on it. Grade: .8/1